POLIS: The Trial of Socrates - Finalizing some lettering

in #comics2 years ago (edited)

Revision.jpg

My last post here asked about a font change I was thinking about. I didn't get a very large response, but I decided to make that change, and otherwise improve some of the lettering.

Take a look at the comparison:

Original

Socrates_014-015_lores.jpg

Revised

Socrates_014-015_lores_v3.jpg

Original

Socrates_016_lores.jpg

Revised

Socrates_016_lores_v2.jpg

I added some SFX, changed the font, massaged the bubbles, and slightly thickened up the panel borders.

What do you think? Improved, or am I spinning my wheels?

Art by Daniel Becker.

Previous colored pages: Page 14-15 | Page 16 | Page 17 | Page 18 | Page 19


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I like the revised one better, has a Greek-er feel to it, in my opinion.

Also come back to steem! Been missing you man! Fundition is dropping some big votes, you gotta get in on that!

Miss your posts man!
Hope you are doing well 😃

Also prefer the revised one, is more spaced and easier to read 👍👍

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