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RE: Folco’s Birth – Page 07 and 08
Just a quick note: at first I was charmed with the harsh black & white style you use, it's my favorite style. Now, some bits of larger plot begin to appear and it becomes rather intriguing... I'd like to see more & more of this -- BUT! No more than 2 pages per post, I think it'd be more thrilling for your readers to have some waiting to do for the next page!
Thanks for this, @nyarlathotep :)
As long as enough informations transits through these two pages, I think it will be ok.
I was suspecting some heavy dialog management problems last time and feared to place an interruption in the middle of an action that shouldn't be sliced :)
But now, I guess knowing when to stop is also part of the storytelling skills to acquire :D