"Ithaqa" Comic Book Update #194 A Subtle Shift
So here you can see one of our less drastic updates in progress.
The edits that were suggested to us by a UK publisher were not just in relation to the contents of our pages, but the order of them as well.
In the original version, I cut away from this scene in the middle of it to go check in on Harvey Bolton, and then we came back towards the middle of issue. It made the scene seem like it was taking place over many hours or days when that wasn't the case. So we re-ordered the pages so that there was less cutaway between the Harvey Bolton scenes, and the Mookie scenes.
Because the scene was no longer cut away from in the middle, we didn't need an establishing shot of the cafe + Mookie's car to re-orient the reader, so we cut it!
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Oh, it is super interesting how an editorial change can really affect a page's narrative !
Love these posts :)
Yeah, it was very interesting to hear a professional read into the structure of our comic so deeply, and then provide insights into what he noticed!
A lot of his issues came down to page order!
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