Folco’s Birth – Page 19steemCreated with Sketch.

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New page incoming in Folco's Birth scratchy story !




It was an interesting one to work on, trying to give some expressivity to characters and a bit of ambience while keeping a quick spontaneous sketchy style.

It took some time to finish, not due to difficulties, but because it was opening to a choice for the next pages : either sticking to the main road to the end of the story, or offering ourselves a small walk in the city's history.

I spent a bit of time wondering whether derailing from the main topic would be a bad or a good way to go, and I realized that this Samson guy could be an interesting storyteller, instead of staying a simple shady big-armed dude.

This imaginary man has spent many imagnary years living in his imaginary city, it would be a shame not to let him share bits of his knowledge and experience with us :)

Now, let's go for the current page of our scratchy-sketchy narrative and let's put a foot on the small walk in Ravanetta Island's past !


>>Previously in Folco's Birth<<
(Ebook file : Pages 1-18)


PAGE 19


Thanks for reading !

Have a nice day, people, and see you next time :)

Berien



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Wonderful new page, Pascal ! I really like how you kept the sketchy style because it is so very flowing, like reading a comic that flows from a dreamy place :)

I also like how you chose to go with the exploration route! Main story is nice, too, but I think, going down the winding path, it will enrich the main story in the long run anyway :)

I look forward what's going to unveil in the next pages ! :D

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Thanks a lot Liske 😘

That shouldn't go too far outside of the main plot, but I think I might not find again any occasion to talk about the Vecchia's streets backstory later, so better do it now☺️

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I like that you keep such consistent darkness and mood about this comic. Nice page Berien :).

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Thanks @scrawly ! Happy you like these aspects 😉 I fear the moment I'll have to deal with lighter ambience... A lot less comfortable for me 😆

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Thanks a lot ;-)

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