Sun vs human (original poetry) [day #3]
The glow of his heart penetrates the human heart
Burning the arrogant spirit's pride
Stung the liar
When humans hold up arms of pride
The sun continues to give and never take pride
When humans are arrogant
The sun is always at the top but never arrogant
The sun just gives, gives and gives
Humans sometimes give but ask more
The sun continues to duck and wash away cool
Humans continue to look for the tops while crawling
The sun is bright
Man is dark and dark, what's more the "evil"
Double licker
The sun greets the whole universe without favoritism
Man greets who he likes
And that brings a lot to him
The Sun Smiles beautifully without time
The morning is unpretentious
A cheerful afternoon
Twilight glows and stitches
Man smiles choosing time
Morning breaks
Afternoon depending on income
Night if there is beauty
The sun is learning in humans
Humans often forget the Sun
Who we are, is that as human as it is now?
By @zulacut
(in Indonesian)
Matahari vs manusia
Semburat cahayanya menembus relung hati Manusia
Membakar kesombongan jiwa si angkuh
Menyengat raga si pendusta
Saat manusia mengacung tangan kesombongan
Matahari terus memberi dan tak pernah berbangga
Saat manusia congkak
Matahari selalu berada dipuncak tapi tidak pernah pongah
Matahari hanya memberi, memberi dan memberi
Manusia kadang memberi tapi lebih banyak meminta
Matahari terus merunduk dan membasuh sejuk
Manusia terus mencari puncak walau sambil merangkak
Matahari terang benderang
Manusia pekat dan kelam, apa lagi si “jahat”
Penjilat dua muka
Matahari menyapa seluruh semesta tanpa pilih kasih
Manusia menyapa siapa yang dia suka
Dan yang banyak membawa keuntungan untuknya
Matahari Tersenyum indah tanpa kenal waktu
Pagi bersahaja
Siang ceria
Senja berseri dan berpatri
Manusia tersenyum memilih waktu
Pagi terbata
Siang tergantung penghasilan
Malam kalau ada keindahan
Matahari belajar pada manusia
Manusia sering lupa kepada Matahari
Siapa kita, sepongah itukah sekarang manusia ?
Thank you for reading and upvote this poem, do not forget my suggestions and feedback
I wrote this poem in order to participate in 100 days of poetry by @d-pend in steemit-school. for friends who want to join this community please go to ink discord
Regards
@zulacut
Bereh that kata2 droneuh bg.
bahasa jiwa..:-)
Mantap
terimakasih @munawirawin, saran, untuk sementara jangan di upvote di komentar, nanti SP mu melemah,..:-)
Beautiful approach that you recreate in your poem, @zulacut. That contrast is as real as the day clear and the night dark. I loved it.
This is to inform on behalf of @d-pend that your poetry for 100 day challenge is seen. Keep up the good work.