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Today I was taking off your clothes,
while you told me with a smile that was impossible for you..
your memory erased again and you asking my age again..
my heart broke into a thousand pieces by dressing you,
No, the days will not be in vain sleeping by your side like a child and like a man..
from my insides and from the outskirts the tears are drowning me,
and you can not notice it .. I know you understand in your deep self
is inevitable to spend the days thinking I don't want to get away from you!
Delicate the moment while you sleep and I caressing you, overflowing me like a river
like a naked soul, with errors and complexes ...
thinking that you always being worried about me
with my flaws and weaknesses.
Worried about what I lived, worried about what was ..
I hope not to disappoint you.
What a beautiful poem, your words just dance around like naked poetry...There is just so much emotion that vibrates from this piece. It's so...heart wrenching. In a wonderful way.
you are reading my "diary" in the blockchain, I appreciate your words very much ... it is not easy to get away from a family member and be loved, after so many experiences.
Thank you
you are not disappointing anyone with those delicate , meaningful and soul touching word ..I can’t imagine how i would feel if someone read it to me .
very BEAUTIFUL !
thank you very much for your gold words.
very beautiful words @yusaymon, after I understand from each of your words this has a very profound meaning, and can touch my soul. I understand that this sounds like a poem, and it's really cool, I like your words, because I love poetry very much. Thanks for sharing... :)
thanks you for your words
The emotions and the paradox inside this piece is amazing I thought you were best at art, never knew your poetry as well is explicit and beautiful, I love it really, it's beautiful.
Thank you Jose
Of course, buddy,
i am reading full article but i should what type comment i can't understand..
Thanks for great share...........best of luck @yusaymon
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STOPLindas palabras las que estas dejando para todos nosotros, eres todo un poeta enamorado ;)
Gracias Yanes!