Poem / Take time to smell the flowers!

in #poetry7 years ago

Take time to smell the flowers!

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I've been thinking a lot lately
I've been thinking about what I do daily
I've been thinking about the mountains I move
To try get into the good books and be approved

I've finally come to a conclusion
I'm putting a stop to that delusion

No matter how hard I try
No matter how hard I work
People will always lie
And leave me hurt

I've worked for hours just to get burnt
I've given them everything I had
But they've used me and
Ended up treating me like dirt

So I'm gonna stop trying
Because the hard truth is:
Inside I'm dying.

To all those that try their bests
To start a relationship that doesn't work
Continue trying but know when to draw the line
Before you get hurt

By Ethan
2017/06/26

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i could turn that in to a rap song :) I just have to add these words. Kill them hood rats, trap, trap, motherf***er candy bar. lol

Lol good one :D

😂😂😂😂 nice

What a beautiful poetry bro.... But remember there are many people who want our presence live life with being positive nature that's what the principle I believe in....u will never have a positive life with negative mind :)

Very true my friends

Never put your key to happiness into someone else's pocket. True happiness must come from within you. It has never been outside of you.

:D very true thank you for reading and sharing :)

There are people who are worth trying our best for :)

I agree, but there has to be a line, where you are still happy then it's fine but as soon as it hurts for too long you need to up an' out

Smelling these flowers is not going to kill me right?

Well depending on how hard you sniff ;)

Nice Poetry....

"And love is love is love is love is love is love is love is love;

Cannot be killed or swept aside." - Miranda

Just be true to yourself and love is all you really need to worry about. Do that and the rest will flow.

A free verse that rhyme so sadly!

Ethan beautiful words...bless you

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