Poem / My Wolrd's End
My World's End
I got some advice from a friend
He told me "Take your time. This isn't the end"
I knew what he said was true
But after that whole thing with you?
I thought on it for hours
Every second I wasted made me sour
I couldn't believe what I did for you
After all the things you put me through
I guess it's only right
Karma will catch up and deliver her bite
I don't wish for your downfall
I just hope that you treat the next one better than me
Cause after what I've seen
You need to change your self empowered imagery
I'm glad I had a person to lean on
After that fiasco I was feeling beat down
I thought that I would be more depressed
But you were never mine to begin with
For all the memories I had
For a little while I didn't feel bad
I'm grateful for the time we spent
Even though it was one sided I was hellbent
If it weren't for my good friend
I'd still be thinking of you as my worlds end.
By Ethan
2017/07/30
Your poem is clearly about relationships, but also about possible other things. It makes me think of the rapture as I am big Christian.
jamie you like some poem..kindly check my poem too..https://steemit.com/funny/@mrblu/smile-and-look-at-me--blue-post-funny hope i made you smile on that..
It could be viewed in that way ;)
Very emotional. The artwork goes very good with it as well.
Thank you, I make an effort to try to match the art and the poems :)
Nice one there
Good job and another lesson learned. 😁
Bravo!!!
His writing is very good. I am happy with this paper and it is very useful for me. Read your writing as if I have just been hit by heavy rain after a very long dry season. My greetings from Aceh; @fahrilzubir.
Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it :)
really nice dear my vote is small thing for your post it deserve more :)
No matter how insignificant your vote is the fact that you read my poem make me glad enough :) Thank you!
Parting is always such sweet sorrow at the end of a love affair.
i liked it a lot, i can relate , great poem
Thank you :)
Nice to see a lot poets here. And props to those who support poetry too. :)
I hope the time will come that even the simplest writers would be noticed too. Really it is consistency and hard work. My newfound love in poetry especially in haiku is a bit of underground as it is mostly in the crypto theme. And i'm loving it. :)
ANIME AND POETRY?
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE!
& you gained a new follower too. ;)
Thank you, Anime is one of my savors. Thus it relates to most of what I write ;)