Poem / Just Disappear
Just Disappear
J ust leave me to my own
U nderstand I need time alone
S top trying to fix my heart bone
T ry to stop calling my phone
D isappear from my sight
I sn't this exactly like that night?
S tubborn as ever why can't you see
A ll that you want me to be
P eople will always judge
P ut me first for once
E verything you've said
A ll floats in my head
R emember I'm all I want to be
By Ethan
2017/08/07
This is a pretty cool poem Ethan, I liked the GIF you used too,
Uchiha for the win. Interesting format of limerick rhyming plus a phrase poem. nice job, mate. I am glad to see that poetry is taking off here on steemit. keep it up. I have a poem on my blog too called "Metamorphic" that I would like others to see.
Post me a link and I'll check it out, thank you for the support :)
Thanks for this beautiful poem ,cheers.
I'm feeling that conveyed experience of someone being controlled. Nice tone.
Don't you just wish you had the superpowers of Obita ^.^
I would prefer Uchiha Itachi and the Tsukuyomi.
Nice lines!!! Deep meaning, thank you for sharing such great lines. I enjoyed it and I feel it.
Cool idea with these letters :)
And beautiful poem.
Bless :)
Good lines, I love how ur motivation was the word "just disappear". Love ur poems as always , keep up the good poetry <3
Thank you, poems can come from anything and those were the two words that rang within my head :)
upvoted! Thanks for sharing this beautiful and heart felt piece. Following you for more
Really like it. It resonates with me...
Keep on writing :)
Ethan, I love your poem because it ends with a high positive. You are saying to the other person that you are all you want to be. That is what I truly believe in. One needs to feel that he/she is complete without an outsider judging him/her. Loved it! :D