Poem / Human pt 2

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Human pt 2

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Done in again
Last night was absolute pain
Why did I go
I should've stayed home

I hoped it wouldn't be so soon
I hate feeling blue

I ended up regretting
Everything that I had built between us
Now I feel like I should've just kept to myself
Should have left my feelings on the shelf

I was stupid to think you'd be different
There is no escape from the hand I've been dealt
No matter how much I've tried
People will always lie

I stood there like an idiot just watching
My heart broke and I felt like votching
I was already beat from this week
I wish I stayed home and enjoyed a good sleep

I'm done with emotions
They're just ridiculously flawed notions
I don't want to have to look in someones eyes
That's gonna be my downfall and demise

By Ethan
2017/07/29

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Great post!

Your poem is thought provoking. It hints at sadness and pain, yet you show images that makes me think of comics and heroes. I like it!

Thanks bud, I got quite hurt and it's slowly getting better...

The anime is nice, but if you really want to get serious about your writing you should checkout the works of Alexander Nimos and other writers like that.

Eventually I will but at the moment I'm just expressing in the time being.

Lucifer was once an angel. Never trust

Great work, lovely prose.

That's a great poem, love the images too:)

I'm glad I can read brilliant poems on Steemit.

i should have wrote poetry in college. This expresses perfectly the feelings that I felt. Thanks for sharing and just know life and relationships get better with age.

first photo is so true and your poem also...really deep!

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