Poem / Asking What's Wrong?
Asking What's Wrong?
A sking what happened when I don't wanna speak
S eeking answers I don't keep
K nowing it only troubles me when you pry
I don't want you to ask me why
N ot knowing the exactly details myself
G oing through things in a blur
W hat can you do
H ow can you help me
A t this current point
T elling you would help eventually
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S ometimes I also need to vent
W hat exactly is wrong?
R ight, it started during a song
O ver the radio it played bringing memories of that day
N othing went right, It build up all through the night
G rowing into a huge mess, this was just another of life's tests
By Ethan
2017/08/16
upvoted super thumbs up master senpai...^_^ kindly upvote also my post..its about breaking up....with someone you love....https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/the-bluepost-break-ups-hurts-to-much-losing-someone-you-love-poem
I see what you did there!
Now I love the pattern you just used...
This is awesome
This is such a good poem and so relatable. I love the typography! Tanks for sharing!
Well done, but what was it that was remembered because of the song?!
just issues ;)
When people want to help, unfortunately it may not always be the right way by asking what is wrong. I guess your poem made me reflect that perhaps the best way to start is asking, "Do you need to talk?" or "I'm here whenever you need me". But most will ask what is wrong. I guess I will have to use my intuitive gut to see what is the best way to approach someone. Very good poem to make me reflect! Thanks Ethan! :D
I'm glad it gave you some insight :) when confronting a guy, "what's wrong?" is most definitely not the best way to get him to speak
that is such an intellectual creativity on display,
showing it like a glistening ray,
it shows without a husky bray,
resplendent is your mental poetic virtuoso that is on a repetitive replay
The gap between the first letters make a cool effect to the poem :) Resteemed!
Thanks :D
wow this is creativity nice one