gedig: AAN SY LIEFDE

in #poem7 years ago

Die eiland drome onder die oggend
En groot takke val rustigheid;
Die Peahens dans op 'n gladde grasperk,
'N Papegaai swaai op 'n boom,
Raging op sy eie beeld in die geverfde see.
Hier sal ons ons eensame skip moor
En dwaal ooit met geweefde hande,
Met sagte lip tot lip,
Langs die gras, langs die sand,
Murmuring hoe ver weg is die onbemande lande:
Hoe ons alleen van sterflinge is
Versteek onder rustige takke uitmekaar,
Terwyl ons liefde 'n Indiese ster word,
'N Meteoor van die brandende hart,
Een met die gety wat skyn, die vlerke wat skyn en
pyl,
Die swaar takke, die brandende duif
Dit dag en dag sug en sug:
Hoe wanneer ons ons skakerings sterf, sal dit roei,
As Eva die veeragtige paaie gesit het,
Met donsvoetsool in die water se slapende bliksem

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thanks for sharing the experience you had when first starting out. i will keep that in mind for any future comments i might be making. thanks for preventing new steemians from making those mistakes :) by the way i like what your doing here on steem, you keep it real, i can appreciate that for sure :)
thanks for sharing your experience :) ..

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