Stirring

in #verse9 years ago (edited)

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Stirred uneasily
Uneasy
Sorry for sorrow
Waves

Weeping lament lives
Exploded rumbling
Rinai fell short
Moaning heart touch

The emotion of the burning soul
Tearing loyal love
Lying down
Broken love triangle

Sighed the whole pulse
Shivering blue frost
The breath of love dies
Slammed rigidly

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I like this line of your poem
Weeping lament lives
Exploded rumbling
Rinai fell short
Moaning heart touch

The emotion of the burning soul
Tearing loyal love
Lying down
Broken love triangle

Sighed the whole pulse
Shivering blue frost
The breath of love dies
Slammed rigidly
Nice writing

This is awesome, Resteemed!

thanks you very much

Looks very pretty🌻

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