Spoken Word Poetry - The Peace on Terror (Original Poem/Video)

in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)

Hey guys! This is my first introductory attempt at a spoken word poetry reciting one of my original poems.

I hope you all enjoy, and can resonate with these words and reflect on what this poem is all about.

I'd really appreciate any form of feedback to improve my next video.

Thank you!

<3

Words to the poem can be found in my previous post here: https://steemit.com/poetry/@viazenar/the-peace-on-terror-original-poem

Or by request via comments

- viazenar

For more original poetry, self-development articles & quotes please follow @viazenar

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     7 years ago 

    nice idea! :)

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     7 years ago 

    Thank you!

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     7 years ago (edited)

    wonderful poem. Would be a great entry for Steemit Poetry Slam (Rewards contest!). Nice to meet you!
    OH, and for feedback on the video: I would be better if you didi not hold the camara, I think.

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     7 years ago 

    Thank you so much!! I really appreciate the feedback. Yes I was thinking the same thing also :) I'll definitely check out the poetry slam contest.

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     7 years ago 

    This contest might also be for you POETRY CONTEST: Runaway Rhymes 5: Fiction Depiction - Steemit is a wonderful place for poets.

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     7 years ago 

    Awesome. Thank you again :) this makes me excited! If you come across anything else please let me know.

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     7 years ago 

    Just check the Tag poetry and the Tag contest regulary and visit my profile I take part in many creative contests. Have fun!

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       7 years ago 

      This is great. If I could upvote it twice I would.

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       7 years ago 

      Wow great poem! You are awesome! Upvoted and followed you hope you can follow me too. Cool avatar as well

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       7 years ago 

      Thank you so much 🙏 I love your avatar too!

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         7 years ago 

        Hello and welcome to Steemit! I wish you a ton of good read, heaps of fun and lots of inspiration! Just do it :) Also have fun reading my blog!
        Best,
        @velimir

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         7 years ago 

        This was very touching. I followed to see more of your great content!

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         7 years ago 

        Thanks so much :) I'll be uploading more of my spoken poetry next week!

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           7 years ago 

          Awesome! I'll make sure to check it out!

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             7 years ago 

            as you see for yourself video version of your poem perform much better than the text one! :) keep it up

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             7 years ago (edited)

            Yep I've noticed that! Looks like more videos will be on their way :)

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