Creators and Gods. (A small test chapter)

in #fiction8 years ago (edited)

I thought of this nice idea for a story and I decided to write a small test chapter.
Even though with my current English skillz it's gonna be probably quite bad.
I still wanted to try though...


On a planet called "Muma".


"Hurry up, Tim!"
Said a woman, dressed in black with a voluptuous body and curly long black hair, she was Tim's mother.

"Yes, mom!"
Tim chirped, as he ran to his mother.
He was quite tall with a vigorous body, smooth short red hair and sparkling round half golden half black eyes.

They were heading to the Great Palace of the planet's kingdom.
The Great Palace was huge, taking over 1/4 of the kingdom's size.
It was built with the magic white bricks called "Aftharta".
Those bricks were said to be indestructible, by both magic and physical attacks.
Also, they were pretty rare. So their price was astronomically high.
Most of the bricks were brought from other planets.
The King had to use the kingdom's accumulated wealth of thousands of years to buy them and build that palace.

Inside of the Great Palace, geniuses and people with very high statuses were learning, studying and training in order to one day become Creators!

Creators could create their own planet from scratch and perhaps even become a God. They would be able to create new ecosystems, life forms, pretty much anything and much more! But Creators mostly just invited other races and people to live on their planet.

The bigger the planet, the bigger the population, the more powerful would the Creators grow!
They could perhaps even ascend to being a GOD!

Of course, becoming a Creator was extraordinarily hard!
It was so hard, that millions of people have died of old age while trying to become one. And ordinary people could live up to 500 years!

And if as that wasn't enough, creating a new planet was even harder!
It required tons of resources, a tremendous amount of knowledge and magic power.

Ten thousand years have already passed since someone became a Creator and sadly, the last one couldn't finish up creating his planet...
He used almost all his life-force in order the create the core of his planet and he didn't succeed, it backfired, killing him the process.

And now, the planet "Muma" was in need of a new Creator and a new planet. The planet "Muma" was already overpopulated, food shortages and wars were a common thing. Their planet was actually slowly self-destructing, it just couldn't bear that many humans.

And the creator of the planet has long since abandoned "Muma".
He blocked all of the trading, teleportation and communication with other planets...
And then he created the planet's council and left everything to it.

Previously, in order to enter the Great Palace and start learning, studying and training to become a Creator, you either had to pay a huge amount of gold or have a really high status.

Now, the council of the planet "Muma", announced that anyone could enter the Palace for free! As long as they had a little talent, at least.

A really talented person possessed a stronger body, more magic power and extraordinary intelligence. A perfect candidate for a Creator!

They even said, that if anyone manages to become a Creator, the kingdom, would support that Creator.
They would give him or her tons of resources, information and would greatly aid in the creation of his or her world!

Of course, they would first need to sign a magic peace contract of "Muma".
The peace contract had a few simple rules.

First rule: The Creator must allow humans and other species from the planet "Muma" to travel and live in his newly created planet.

Second rule: The Creator must aid and help the humans and other species from the planet "Muma" and not harm them.

Third rule: If the rules are broken, the Creator shall die immediately.

The news got spread immediately all over the planet.
Soon after, thousands of people from other towns and places embarked on their journey to the Great Palace.

They all wanted to try their chances to enter the Great Palace and perhaps become a Creator! Even though they knew that it was extraordinarily hard.

What if they somehow succeed? That's all they could think about.
Perhaps they could even become a GOD!
The first step was to become a Creator though.

Of course, becoming a God was a thousand times harder than becoming a Creator.
So they quickly discarded that idea.


The END.

Perharps I will write some more and continue the story...

Thanks for reading!

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