My Second Editing Attempt

So I Originally was Going to Do a Review of Luigi's Mansion today, But Steemit Decided to mess up and Not actually post the Review when I Clicked Post, so I basically lost the Entire thing.

So instead here is my Second Video that I attempted at Editing.

Note this video was Recorded and posted Last Year on Youtube.

This Video I Found the Method of posting up the Percentages' while not Obscuring the Gameplay.

It was also my first attempt at a Comedic Skit Based on the Joke that "For Glory Little Macs Always Kill themselves with their Side Special".

Im not sure how funny it really is by today's standards so Please give some Feedback.