Steemjetpoetry: Written Deer

in #steemjet8 years ago (edited)

In hope of global adoption for blockchain poets. Here is my second poetry works in respect to @steemjet and @dimimp .

Written Deer


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My handwriting is all over these woods.

No, my handwriting is these woods,

each tree a half-print, half-cursive scrawl,

each loop a limb. My house is somewhere

here, & I have scribbled myself inside it.

What is home but a book we write, then

read again & again, each time dog-earing

different pages. In the morning I wake

in time to pencil the sun high. How

fragile it is, the world—I almost wrote

the word but caught myself. Either one

could be erased. In these written woods,

branches smudge around me whenever

I take a deep breath. Still, written fawns

lie in the written sunlight that dapples

their backs. What is home but a passage

I’m writing & underlining every time I read it.



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About the poem

“I was reading Szymborska when I came across this line: ‘Why does this written doe bound through these written woods?’ The question made me want to push further into the setting—the written woods—and to consider what it means to both create and experience (or write and read) a place. I draft all of my poems longhand, often writing very quickly, and in my messy half-print, half-cursive handwriting, world and word were almost indistinguishable. As the poem came into focus, this conflation made its way into the poem’s
argument.


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This was compelling and superb. I found your post quite interesting and gave it 50% upvote. Always remember to use Steemjet tag

Joshua Etim

Oh thanks steemjet community for the visit and the vote

Thanks for such a great piece man, the only thing I wish I know how to do, writing poetry.... Thumbs up man

Poetry is just a flower of life bro. Thx for stopping by.

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