Terry's Poetry Tryings. Once There Was a Forest.

in #poetry7 years ago


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Huge malls around - glass and concrete,
Here Earth's point of sorest.
Just look at this shiny new street!
But once there was a forest...

Work is non-stop - oil reserves,
Stop, think and be more honest.
Whole species die - Earth is reserved!
But once there was a forest...

Just wasteland - keeps toxic waste.
A way to torture? Shortest!
Soon a new poison will be placed,
But once there was a forest...

Need more and more - no matter what!
Don't you think this is oddest?
Cars, buildings, gadgets... any rubbish,
But once there was a forest...

Huge malls around - glass and concrete,
Here Earth's point of sorest.
Just look at this shiny new street -
One day there will be forest!


Sincerely, Terry Craft.

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nice post :) we should alle reconnect to nature ;)

I don't think that everyone will like it. But at least learn not to destroy everything around - it's worth it.

Love the forest and your lovely poem.
Thank you
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Francis

Thank you. I know that it's not ideal in grammar... english is not my native language, but I try :)

Huge malls around - glass and concrete,
Here Earth's point of sorest.
Just look at this shiny new street -
One day there will be forest!

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Thank you @kyriacos ! Feedback is very important for me.

always a pleasure.

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