Maybe - Original Poetry

in #poetry10 years ago

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Maybe...

Maybe I should

Changing something

In myself

In my life

Inside me

Outside me

All...



But all this:

My habits

Your advices

Opinions

Rebukes

And praises

It's all

Making me blind



For that...

That which

Is really important

In myself

In my life

Inside me

Outside me

It's sad



Sad...

Sad that

My habits

Your advices

Opinions

Rebukes

And praises

It's all

That I have...



All that I have...

If suddenly

Changed

Who am I?

Without

This all

Changes are scary

For me...



My habits -

It's myself

Your advices -

It's my life

Opinions

Rebukes

And praises

Inside me

Outside me

It's better

For me

To live

Blind




Sincerely, TerryCraft

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Beautiful poem :)

Yeah, nice one! Upvoted! I guess that maybe-thing happens to all of us... every day :-)

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