JUST ONE MORE CHANCE (a poem + artwork)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)






JUST ONE MORE CHANCE



I will never, ever forget
About that time... there's no regret
Yes, it was definitely love
Nothing else I could ever think of

Thinking that we could always be together
Wasn't a selfish thought... never!
Even if it's a lie, I'd try to believe
That time with you, I want to relive

I didn't leave... and never will
This is a promise I would fulfill
Just give me one more chance...
One more chance, with you I'd dance

The longing I feel deep within
Nothing can ever come in between
Even if I stay standing in the rain
I'd consider this longing a beautiful pain

If only you'd grant me this chance...
Just one more chance to dance...
In this song of love and time
Where happiness cost not a single dime


@tegoshei





I am still not over Super Junior's "One More Chance" song that I made a poem inspired by it. I just finished working for today and my mind is still LSS-ing (LSS = Last Song Syndrome) their song... I kept watching the video during my break time... And now I watched it again after work... and then an inspiration came up for me to write this poem... As for the sketch above, it's a quick sketch I made 2 or 3 months ago?? I already forgot, but I saw it in my folder and thought... His expression would fit my poem...


Anyway, I hope you enjoyed reading the poem as well as the sketch. I guess I'll call it a night... I'm beat! xD Ohh... I need to catch up with my webtoons first!! hahaha... xD and I have to watch the music video one more time... Okay.. I'm out!

Thanks for dropping by!
Love lots, @tegoshei

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Nice draw!

wonderful art, good post, thanks for sharing
following & up voted

Thank you! :)

I like that drawing

it was just a quick sketch, but thank you so much!! ^^

Sweet poem and I agree the drawing go nice with the poem :)

Thank you @super-em... and maybe.. sis @djynn? hihihi ^^

nice one tegoshei :)

hehehe.. malaman masyado xD may hugot ha :D

malaman.. makatas.. masarsa... aww.. hahaha.. xD inspired ra na sa come back sa Super Junior brad!! ^^

hahahaha adika jud uie xD

buyagi brad!! hahahaha :p

tahahaha nice ka brad :D

Hugot ba yan shei? hahaha

Lol... d nman masyado... inspired lang sa new song ng Super Junior... hahahaha xDD kaya nkagawa ng poem... :P

Mu comment ta kog, "gugmang gi at*y nasad ang naa sa imo huna huna" but I scrolled down and this is actually based on a song heeeee. Good job as always, Shi!

Hahahahaha.... Love you much!!! <3 Samok pa ang gugmang giatay ky nibalik npud ra ba og paramdam ang kagwang... xD

Ay, murag ghost nag paramdam. Manang kalag kalag oi. Ingna sya pag sure hahhaahh

Hahahahahahah.... if only it were THAT easy! charmos ginamos!

Try daw Shi, ingnag I love you in bisaya hahahha! Bahala na sya mag interpret or google translate kyaaaaa! 😘

uii... nianhi amo common friend nga Japanese... aq giingnan siya (kay ngcontaky nman mi balik).. ana xa... Kaila pa kha si friend naq? aq giingnan, oo.. kaila pa ky kahibaw man xa nga I like you.. hahah xD nireply xa... I see... I like you, too...lol~~~ paasa pa more?? then naa pa pakapin... "I miss you.. I'll go there someday so please keep in touch.." patay na.. aqng heart... T_T

What the! Tsk tsk, ayaw nalang jud ug gukod sa tawng kusog mu dagan

ky kung di gyud... di gyud... wa na tai pugsanay... ay nalang... ay naqg atika... pero atik ra haaa ahh~ aww.. hahaha xDDD

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