Remembering Poems #7

in #poetry8 years ago

Hello, this is my seventh publication remembering several of my poems, modifying and eliminating stanzas.


Poem - Never

  • In this poem, I made some changes

Maybe you never loved me,
You never wanted to see inside me,
You never knew what I had in my heart,
No matter how hard I try,
I will never tire of looking at you,
I will try to conquer you,
I will look for one and a thousand ways,
Of offering you my love,
To get to your heart,
I will not surrender in this battle for love.


Poem - We Meet

  • In this poem, I did not make changes

Today we meet,
It was not a sunny day,
But seeing your eyes,
I got trapped,
I just look at that lunar,
Picturesque that blends with your face,
Next to that special iris,
Than does not let me blink,
Only by hearing your voice,
Than says hello how are you,
I managed to free myself,
And when changing the view,
I saw your beautiful silhouette,
That exuberant stretched skin,
She hungry for opportunities,
And perennial before fighting.


Poem - Smile

  • In this poem, I did not make changes

A single smile of understanding and kindness,
Break the salt in the wound of the earth,
Releases the tensions of others,
And it makes the soul grow,
That is the purpose you have,
Fight for personal growth,
The smile benefits the one who receives it,
It has an unusual metamorphosis,
Smile that fills my soul with happiness,
It is so penetrating and hypnotizing me,
It's a growing sensation,
Than makes you forget.



By Leonardo Blanco (@tcpaikano)

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The smile benefits the one who receives it,
It has an unusual metamorphosis,
Smile that fills my soul with happiness,
It is so penetrating and hypnotizing me,
It's a growing sensation,
Than makes you forget.

I so much love these lines...
Nice collection you have here

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I can almost see the blood from the bleeding heart ;-)

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