Steemit Open Mic Songwriter's Challenge Week 7 - "No Other Chance"
Hello fellow Steemian..
This post is my first entry for Steemit Open Mic Songwriter's Challenge Week 7. My regard for the Open Mic Songwriter's Challenge team @luzcypher @meno @krystle @passion-ground
And you don't know where to go
Come to me instead
Sing and dance with me
Where noone seems to care
Let me whisper you a spell
Sing and dance with me
Come on, come on, stamp your feet on the dancefloor
Let the music takes over your body
Come on, come on, deliver your song more
Let the melody hugs your great voice
It's all out of your range
Coz this is the right place and exact time to begin
Thanks for dropping by, I hope you all enjoy my performance. Have a nice day :)
Thanks for singing us a song.
You're welcome. I'm happy to take a part in this contest..
Good entry, Sugar! Your vocal was sweet along with the underlying melody. The only thing is that it sounded to me as though your guitar was out-of-tune, which took away a lot from the performance, and might have also thrown off your vocals at times too. Apart from that, this is a good entry. Thank you!
Yes I'm sorry about the guitar, I'll get it fixed later so that it'll be in tune. And I definitely take all the compliments, thanks passion :)
really nice song dude! I love the lyrics and you have a really nice voice! What the heck is that sound in the background though? It sounds like a lorry idling outside your window or something? x
Thanks dude :D
I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Hahaha I'm not sure that it was a lorry but I guess it came from an old computer in the room, the buzz was so loud. Sorry for the noise..
hehe. no problem. it was atmospheric! But maybe just a bit TOO atmospheric XD
Hahaha I will shut the computer down next time, damn computer XD