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RE: SLC-S24/W4 - Do you think it is ideal for financial burden of a home to be managed by the husband alone | No Deal
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You did a good work but need some improvements like use quotation marks and proper formating for your inner dialogues. Pick up more creative lines for your dialogues.
Overall i like your post that's effectively conveys the importance of shared financial responsibility in marriage.
I am very sorry to hear about your personal story about your father's passing. It's impact on your family is poignant and relatable.
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