POEM: WISH COMET

in #busy8 years ago (edited)

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She was given a wish
To wash the past
Into squeaky memories

She took the time
To tame excessive
Modifications

She said, “If I had to
Do this thing again

I would want to be known
And know this world more fully

And see with a sight
‘Till my salacious senses
reveled in details

And speak of the special
Intricate divits on an orange peel

And travel to the tame
And troubled places on this earth

Until I knew were to find
And bring peace

I want to be known and know
Myself more fully

That I may grasp the greatness
Of the time given to me”


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It doesn’t matter
They will not
Acknowledge
Your sacrifice

The hours strung to the road

The force from your hugs

The times you put yourself last

And all the chatter
Pulling down
Your gracious
Helping hand

Pulls on your hours

Pricks your arms

And lessens your energy

But in this matter
You will outlast
Their bludgeons
With commitment


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in lives choices are always there, there is no way a choice we ever be just one alone. Until we start seeing the worth of value which we carry then what we should be able to attain may just exist in our mind alone.

We do need the self belief, to add meaning to our existence. We are what we make ourself become.
Thank you for this.

And for your recovery process, you have not slacked a bit, your choices of colourful place as this is tantamount, its reminds me that life is once and ought to be lived without fears.

You spread motivate words even when you do need motivation, this is peculiar to the selflessness exhibited by Jesus.
We are all lucky to have such an examplary one as you

was curious with the intent of your poem, may I know the meaning behind the wish comet?
the contents are very beautiful,,
thanks @rubenalexander

Hi man please tell me from where you come this words?
Oh amazing
Great poem.

Would you like to read his speech?
That would be the best way.
That this democratization of information and opinion would lead to vigorous debate and encourage a young monk to question the church?
His father hoped that Daniel would grow up to be a wise and famous man.
How long would these mind games go on?

well we all wish to wash our past if it is with some bad memories and wish to start now with some good and always happiest moments and i also wish to all of us that GOD give us the joys and many happines in our life and a great success
your first poem is really exellent and i like it much bcz i find some good things for some think in my own view maybe not for everone ....

its a great poem that is touch my heart... i think everyone like your post....best of luck...

excellent post ..loving to your blog.thanks for sharing..

You spread motivate words even when you do need motivation, this is peculiar to the selflessness exhibited by Jesus.
We are all lucky to have such an examplary one as you
tnx for upvote

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