POEM: SHARING MONTESSORI
If you counted your words
As a gram of regret
You would have tethered them
To your thoughts
Grams across days
Spread across years
You spoke as though
I wasn’t like you
We are dreams in a bottle
Waiting for the right home
Montessori digs
By looking within
Her sight shovel
Lets the child,
And their inner schools,
Focus light and love
Taking minnows to mastery
She with her clipboard
Lets the inner child
In you find fullness
So your mind can feast
And teach the world
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Sorry @rubenalexander , if you present the intentions of each of your poem below, it may be better understood by all readers.
thanks :)
This is the part of how I use poetry that I love the best. You are free to read the poem and come up with your own interpretation. If you feel like you've had a similar experience then that is great. If you don't connect with the poem, that is OK too. If you only like part of the poem then you can mention that in the comments.
now I understand @rubenalexander, keep working and sharing!!! good luck
"We are dream in a bottle
Waiting for the right home"
You are right @rubenalexander, we are all time fighting to be fit here...thanks!
Yes. I saw a mistake I made and fixed it. I have rewritten this line several times and I like this version.
Your poetry is nothing but beauty of child fantasy world....dreaming in confind bottle.... thanks for sharing your fantasy!
thats great and exellent poem i think we always beautifull words to talk with others and hope when other cound our words tehy will be feel good always to met with us
and the second post is beautifull
Excellent words in that poem so reflective and amazing work by you :)
I like your post
Sitting alone in the cold of the night...
You are trying to find what you need to survive?
So afraid? you can't go on?
Left in the silence that tears at your heart ..
They only remind you how broken you are..
You've lost your way..?
But hope is not gone
Cause the sun always sets
And the moon always falls
It feels like the end..
Just pay no mind at all
Keep rolling. ....rolling
Life must go on
Very nic post.
nice post....Thanks for sharing i will done upvote I always see your post. And follow you
good work brother your poetry is always good and now and you prove it many time in your posts to share your brilliant poems