POEM: FUTURE STABILITY
In the nooks and crannies
cranium neurons
of your network center
We walk backward
looking towards
our past events and flavors
The lens we use
to glean peruse
this tumble through time
Is the same we use
to harness color
futures in our mind
artificially
manuafactured
annihilated
architecture
dollars
for deals
whip moon
ostracize
tides
flip
and fade
trends
bend and
wade
advertisements
harvest
tears
stability
robs
years
as you
come
near
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nice poem @rubenalexander its fantastic to see this :)
Capitalists always try to get extra adventage.....from nature but nature try to distribute all thing equally......& here your represent those things which are going on time to time... nice poem @rubenalexander
I love this statement. I am hoping more cryptousers realize this and create sanctuaries to protect nature.
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A very good poem @rubenalexander, you do have a soul of art in you. I really salute you, because you always create a work that can be a good motivation for the crowd. As your poem tells you about this "STABILITY OF THE FUTURE" is so cool. I'm also learning to create poetry, but I can not yet. Therefore I always read your poem, because I want to learn from your work. Can it be?
I really hope to be as successful as you and can share for many people. I have one line of poetry about "life" but this is not as good as you. Because I'm still learning.
Life is very difficult and painful
must struggle for a living for a bite of rice
what should I do for this life
God...!
give your grace and guidance to me
Thank you and hopefully you will be more successful in working.
If you love poetry you can make it. If I feel stuck I always read people who are levels and levels above me. Lately, I've been perplexed and inspired by E.E. Cummings.
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/e-e-cummings
I really like the @rubenalexander poem, but I am still learning to write the poem, because it does not have a good artistic soul like you. Your poem is so cool, so from that I am very inspired from your poetry. I will try to learn again to be successful as you are.
Nice post,one thing we should always avoid is looking towards our past
Nice tone.
Rueben, I could almost feel you wanting to break into verse. I just posted my Introduction post about 45 minutes ago ... it contains two poems (in verse). I've been reading Steemit poetry everyday for almost 2 weeks, however, and am perplexed by the almost complete absence of verse. In any event, the line in your poem I liked the best was "artificially manufactured annihilated architecture." Alliteration, rhyme, meter and rhythm ... hmm ... what's that sound like? Anyway, great job and I look forward to conversing with you and other poets.
Enjoyed your poetry. Gives me a lot to think about! This stood out to me: "stability robs years". Very true!
@rubenalexander...........outstanding poem..........about whip moon...........its a very meaningful .........and your every poem,,,,,,,,,,has different kind of theme.......i really like that .......i wish all the best..........and be success your goal......
wonderful poem beautiful and creative