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RE: Rain in August

in #poetry7 years ago

Skin soaked a sickly mixture of sweat and rain,
beading across my forearms like rivulets of honey
dripping down the side of a jar.

I love this poem - it creates a lot of tension, and I love the cut off line - that suddenness of going under. Got here via @sunravelme's curation, and looking forward to reading more of your work!

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Appreciate the comment! Hoping to have a bit more time to sit and spin some poems day to day. Cheers!

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