wow man wowww... I mean... I have to go I wish I could finish reading all this, but I'll do it with more calm when I come back.. all I can say is that the way you made me imagine the first part, was so good that I'll be dreaming with this all the way... You are improving and its becoming a great story... It's a gift, the fact that you can move people imagination so well... I can't way to come back and finish it.. In fact, I'll read them all again!.