The Punctuation Dilemma

in #poem6 years ago (edited)

On this day and at this time

To the awesomeness of someone, I needed to take a bow
Of a virtual grammatical descriptive kind.
Which suddenly cast a glimmer on my punctuation dilemma
This is the story as it unfolded

Because my communication was a virtual one conveyed in words

I did my best to express my feelings
Using the punctuations that had been afforded me.

The art was her own

Which I notated with an apostrophe

The beauty of which
Caused my ego to be swollen.
Not in days but in hours and minutes
So as I pinpointed the exact time… I did so
with a Colon

And because I wanted to separate certain parts of my communication/explanation

Using language that was heaven sent
It was indeed a qualifying statement within a sentence
So I used parentheses.

Now don’t get it twisted I was not trying to appease

This magnificent artist in rare form.

It was just how her work struck my heart space

And took me by surprise
My muse she had become in an instance in my eyes
Which in the blink of an eye caused me to level up
Betwixt the Cat’s whiskers and the Bee's Knees.

So imagine my dilemma

When I wanted to bow in the presence of such
A Magnanimous, incredible Enigma of creativity
And then everything stopped suddenly
Because I could not find a
Punctuation that would show my gratitude and appreciate
There was/is no punctuation
For the action to bow.

So I settled for an emoji

I guess emoji is the Captain Now.

Emoji image courtesy of dreamstime.com
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That was delightful, Ren:):):)

This is synchronistic I just left your page and I came back to this poem to edit it and add the "fridaypoet's" hashtag to this poem. I will be joining you from this point on to offer my support for a couple of your ventures because you like myself have a passion for poetry. I also will be curating you soon, you have shown so much humility on the Steemit platform yet I have done my due diligence and I know of your credentials you deserve to be at a higher level on this platform. I have a gift for seeing the greatness and potential in others. I know you will be a whale and I am proud to know you at this level so that I can watch you rise. I apologize for the rant I just had a super awesome session with my mentor and got an overdose of inspiration and my life has suddenly changed for the better. Also, your comment on this post means a lot, Although there is an element of truth to this post I thought it was kind of cheezy yet valuable. So Happy weekend @prydefolz make it great!!! Als

This was just excellent! Well done,@rensoul17.

Thank you @pyemoney.

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