[Still] Meditative Haiku

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)

still is the air
still is my mind
breathe ... full is my soul

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Still was originally published in Tattoo, Calling All Soldiers Home. For more information click on the image below.

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I love to meditate...
I really like this poem it very spiritual, with a great
Imagine of peace 🦋

Thank you, May:)

Nice good poem Pryde 🤓 I like this style 4/4/5

Thank you, Moon. My thought with haiku is that it need only come in under 17 syllables. But I do know the thought on this is varied. But for this one ... the shorter and the simpler the better. I think:) I did consider taking our breathe:)

The more Haikus the better... all style are good 🤓

You have a gift for the brevity of haiku

Thank you, Denise. What's better than poetry plus math:)

love the moon and the connection to it

I like the quote. I'm also writing on meditations, feel free to check out my blog and followed list for some resources you may find inspiring. Enjoy!

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