Pastel hues ( Poetry)

in #poetry9 years ago

Pastel hues


Our love was once like a fresh bouquet

our closeness, warm as a favorite song,

But sadly, time-withered it away -

and I wonder, what had I done wrong?


The bright skies turned a gloomy grey

and covered up the sun

coldness swept into your heart 

and our happiness, you flung-

MY joyful heart, ripped out as I breathed

so callously, and done with ease ...

into a puddle, it landed with a splash 

I picked it out gently,

 as your harsh words did lash

... and carried it away

burying it deep within my soul

hoping it would beat

 with life again one day ... 


Then, miraculously, I met you 

 and those hostile words of dark abuse

were replaced with a new bouquet

of sweetness and pastel hues


through time, you nurtured 

a heart I thought always doomed 

and soon the colors returned again

and like a rode, our petals bloomed


Thank you for sunshine and brightening my days

and clearing away the gloomy haze, 

you've given me hope and I hope to never lose 

a new joy of love in pastel hues ...


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You did nothing wrong @poeticsnake and you know that. What a joy it is to see you in full "colour" (Canadian spelling!).

Thank you :D
I am never wrong... (( scratches head)) Yeah... Its true LOL
Thank you for stopping by!

British spelling too 😉

Very nice words in a distinctive way Thank you for sharing

Thank you for dropping by and replying! :D

This is lovely Snekky :)

Aw I like this poetry. There's always be a hope. Someday, someone will treat you like you deserve. Have a good day!

Thank you so so so much! :D

JUST BEAUTIFUL!!

Spoke to me in so many ways that we should never give up hope of being loved and loving again - no matter what our hearts have suffered previously.

Inspiring way for me to start my Monday

Love ya

Down and up again, hope, sadness, anger, love. Like life itself, wonderful poem!

Beautiful poem and picture. I love it. Thank you for sharing!

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