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Your jokes make me comfortable
Longing came, and I couldn't avoid it
Then jealousy disturbed my mind
Forcing me to admit it
Yes, I've fallen in love with you
Now that you know the truth,
Everything that happens and what you feel
I feel it too, now
I'm worried if I didn't get any messages from you even just for one day
And all things becomes not important
My question is not a bullshit
My longing comes from my deepest heart
My jealousy it's really happened
Though I say it with joking
Doesn't mean it's not real
Now you know how I feel,
Then, is this true or just a hope?
Please answer my question...
*Note : Please give me an advice on the comment, what is the best titled for this poem ? Thank You =)
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