Clockwork - Original Poem
Clockwork
Well isn’t this peculiar?
The gears in my chest seem to be broken
No more whirl and no more whiz
Where have all the workers gone?
The Quarter master seems to have left
No more bizzy bees
Nothing but a thrall
That has been placed on a shelf
Oh, look there. Hello little one.
She’s here you say?
She’s mad you say?
Quick, replace the plate
Red turns to blue
Gears turn to full
Over… well over you
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STOPI read the poem, but will not comment on it, for I am not so good with English poetry. It is always easier to understand and appreciate poems in one's native language.
I love reading in English, but feeling poetry is often too much ...
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