Bah Humbug, a Freewrite Poem

in ART LOVERS5 years ago

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What kind of a prompt is "gutless"
this very week of all weeks?
Determination is in short supply
who needs of it to speak?

The shopping is done, the cleaning begun
my will to decorate nill
I know not where the Christmas village is
Perhaps I donated it to goodwill

I have no wreaths, no poisettas
My xmas tree eighteen inches tall
It will be carried from room to room
the brunt of many a funny fall

Here's the problem:

One moment I am determined
the next I am bereft
remembering those who are missing
then cherishing those who are left

But:

My fridge is stocked to overflowing
much cooking still to be done
My love of all these people
will get me off my duff

The bellies will soon all be full
the presents all unwrapped
We'll have made merry in several households
and some of us will get fat.

Happy Holidays Y'all!

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This is my entry to @mariannewest's daily freewrite challenge.
I spent a lot more than five minutes on it, truth be told.
Please come write with us!

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Such rhyming prowess I cannot follow
for my efforts, they will just ring hollow
so my poetic impulses I'll restrain
and your sensibilities I’ll not pain
but I’ll take this opportunity to say
have a very happy Christmas day.

 5 years ago 

You are so much better at it than I am!
LOVED your 31 sentence stories, both of them.
xo

Well I guess if we're competing for corniness, I win hands down;)

Merry Christmas! Really enjoyed the poem!

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 5 years ago 

Thanks! Merry Christmas!

Such a comeback! I must do mine. Relatable piece!

Happy Holidays my poetic friend ♡

 5 years ago 

Great work yourself. I'm so happy you are writing with us again.
This will all soon be over, and we can be truly merry again.

Hoping to stay still and let myself heal. That will help me to stay anchored in the community. It's good to have this opportunity back.

@owasco Express great joy in your poetry. I wish you a happy Christmas day.

 5 years ago 

I wish the very same for you!

"remembering those who are missing
then cherishing those who are left"

You capture the essence of poignancy--to rejoice and grieve in the same moment.

Merry Christmas🎇

 5 years ago 

It can be precarious.
I wish you a happy and healthy holiday season!

 5 years ago 

Haha! Love your twist of humor, but total truth between those lines!

Merry Christmas, beauty!

You are totally adored!

Upped and steemed

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 5 years ago 

Oh my lovie you are the sweetest ever. I'm sure you've decorated to the nines!

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That was a merry one. Thanks. Too sick to clean and shop, no fridge. My belly just filled with pills. 💕

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 5 years ago 

Well then I'm sure am glad I gave you a bit of merry to wash them down with. I wish you health! Happiness!

@owasco I am happy you did so. 😘💕

Thanks for sharing your experience with us!
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 5 years ago 

Thank you! You guys are wonderful

Some lovely rhyming here and a chuckle or two.
Hope you had a good Christmas and a new years plan to get rid of all the fat hahaha
Blessings!

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