True Blood Runs

in #fiftywords6 years ago

Under this umbrella, shall I hide
In this cave, shall I slide
During hottest days and coldest nights
Because they wiped off my tears when I cried
And with them will I always ride
In our veins, true blood RUNS
This is why we are one family forever and once.IMG_20180617_224405_365.JPG

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I like how you used the prompt and took the story in a completely different direction.

Thanks @khadija14
Did you work on it too?

I checked it alreaready @khadija14
We are friends now smiles

Lovely little poem... A good family is so important..

Thank you so much @ablaze

So true. This is why family matters. The strength that keeps us going. Touching poem!

Thanks alot @anikekirsten
Funny how your comment was more touching than the poem smiles

Nicely done, good rhythm, nice metaphors... Thanks!

😄😇😄

@creatr

Thanks alot @creatr
I appreciate; i realy do

Very nice work, @olakunle10. I like the emphasis on family and how deep that bond can be.

I'm sorry I have not replied sooner. As I mentioned in our exchange earlier, I'm recovering my @jayna account. Meanwhile, I have set up a new account as @jaynas-minime.

I thought as much
Let me follow this new account @jaynas-minime
This platform still wants you around; I can tell. Your account aint going nowhere mam.

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