The surprise

Everyone loves a surprise what what kind of surprise matters it could be a party or a candle lit meal but no not me he had to do somthing that i did not expect he really pushed the boat out an he really did not think about how i would feel or maybe i was just over reacting. It all starting when i opened the door a rush of cheap perfume rushed though my nose emm maybe he bought me some cheap perfume, its the thought that counts. I stumbled into the living room too tiered from work, where are you, i shouted softly with a crock in my voice i walked though to the stair quite little rattles was ecohoing though the walls as a creeped up the stairs towards the bed room emmm ........

Can people comment and tell me what they think im not a writer just got an over imaganation.