"An old photo" - Poemchallenge" - by @margaretwise. ✍🏻🗝Poetry is an expression of personal emotions

in #poemchallenge7 years ago (edited)

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The old photo is lying on the floor,

probably a good few years.

Someone has abandoned it,

and he went to the empty world.

Dusty old photo,

trampled by soles.

Probably escaped into emptiness,

and left without strength.

An old photo in the shadow of a cloud,

and in the picture faces.

They look closely,

Someone stopped time.

The old picture is slowly fading,

sparks in their eyes go out.

The words are silent, the hopes dissipate,

and old dreams disappear.

Forever

The picture shows my real family. I present to you briefly. Unfortunately, I do not know the rest of people from my family. Probably they are the sisters and brothers with their families of my great-grandmother and great-grandfather. Time covered the memory and faces of others. However, I am very grateful to my uncle, whom you already know from my posts - "Open air-museum in Sierpc", for finding this photo. A part of our beautiful family is weathered on an old photo, the only thing is that you can imagine conversations, laughter and running children full of vigor and great ideas right after shooting.
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Thank you that you have read my poem, which I do not hide is very emotional for me.

https://steemit.com/life/@margaretwise/the-museum-of-the-mazovian-countryside-in-sierpc-poland-is-a-unique-place-interiors-of-houses-part-4





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This is written from the heart so great that you shared it :)

Thank you my dear friend )

It's a big family, great old photo!
Lovely poem, my dear :)

The photo is the piece of my history and I am very happy to have it. Thank you my dear ;)

Excellent poem and nice photography.
Old is gold.
Nice shearing.

Happy Steeming.

Thank you my dear friend :)

wow, wonderful write up. looking forward for more

Thank you. Appreciate :)

whem see into your old photo album, it turned you as nostalgia, you feel some sense of time machine and you memory going to refresh again, an old photo in poem thats really amazing.

Thank you very much. Your words mean a lot :)

wonderful story my dear friend @margaretwise
thank you for sharing this post

Lovely photo and poem my friend @margaretwise.
Finally we have warmer spring weather and i can handle not being in the tropics:)

I am so happy for your spring touch :) Let it be green and full of flowers :)

very good story,my dear friend @margaretwise,very nice old photograph,thanks for share your family photo,

Nice photo and awesome poem my dear friend

Thank you so much :)

What a grand family! You have a treasure trove here in terms of family history and past stories, memories and imaginations.
We cannot stop time not changes in our life. But we can cherish the warmth and love bestowed upon each other in a big family!
I haven’t got even a single photo of my beloved grand parents! Everything was gone!

Cheers.

It is big treasure for me especially that it is the only one which I got. I am sorry that you don't have any.
Thank you for your wonderful words :)

It is really great treasure for me :) Thank you my friend )

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