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RE: Finish The Story Contest - WEEK #28 My Entry
Hey no problem; I just meant that when you switch perspectives (from one person to the next) and the story is coming from "there perspective", it might be useful to insert something like this to show that it's a break of sorts:
Does that make sense?
Okay I get it now I wasn't sure you meant that kind of divider.
Oh good. It's a non-literary fix of sorts, but I think it would help clarify it for some when they're reading :)