Midnight dream..part IV
Simple thoughts in the middle of the night...
None of you will see tomorrow right
Should it matter if you are not counted by bright?
One is not one if he does not do right
Evil is one if he is just a knight
Humans are more..or less like a bite
Believers on paper..a whisper..a kite
Outside alone when life is unkind
It grabs you and power wastes out of your light
Anger and fear shine through the light
And no one believes you still got fight
But still you manage to pull through this.. tight!
Squeeze through the pain.. you know its a rough fight!
Useless to say my friend..dear friend..this is..*
*you let me know in comments..
Love and life is such a beautiful part of humanity, the joy and pain displayed through deep poetic crafting of words. Simply amazing the skill you have Lidac.
I was trying to figure out the level of my poem so I wrote and published it in parts thinking that this way it will be easier to get a feedback on it..I will also post it all in one just for it to be out there as a whole. Yes this is a poem that represents certain feelings that life creates..at least that was the main ideea..hehe! Thank you for the kind feedback..and taking the time to understand something of it..:) keep in touch!
This [poem says a hundred different things at once and darling i love the flows so much!!!!!
It has a flow and I tried to give it a rhyme because it felt that this way it is more similar to the rhythm of life..Thank you for your comment!
...this is... Who/what? You keep me guessing,
are you talking about, me, fear, life, love, you, all of the above...
You talk about everything ¬hing.. at once..
My head hurts... I give up..
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