'Remembered' - a Short Poem

in #poetry8 years ago

Blackbird


for Wallace Stevens

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to be a blackbird
strutting

on the sill
that rings a flat roof

(one of Stevens’
 thirteen-

 ways to pose)

await the flash
and shutter,

lift off
at unrendered
sky

anonymous,
an eye for worms

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@lazarus-wist
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Inspired by one of my favourite poems; Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird
Thanks for reading.
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It is a simple, free, but limited life to be a bird. Worms on the menu ... you say:)

Yes, so often they end up in my poems without me even realising - an endlessly giving image in my mind, and for the most part beautiful creatures.

Worms on the menu, or on a menu for worms... :0

depends on when you tune in:)

A careful observer you are to summarize the text of the living picture of the bird, and also a hand of poetry. I've enjoyed reading this piece, and I think it has helped me solve a huge problem I’ve had to complete a poem of my own (about a crow).

Thanks Marlyn, glad you liked it, and even more glad to be of service in whatever small way this may have helped :) I look forward to reading it - hopefully - soon!

I see the bird strutting on the limb, what an amazing poem. I love when the imagery captures me this way... I lift off with the blackbird in flight. Well done!

Thank you Janelle, appreciate you stopping by!

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