Steemit Rap Challenge #23 My entry

What's up steemians! I decided to do a drop for a rap challenge, I made it more like the American hip hop style with Kendrick Lamar as my role model. I'm having issues uploading with @dtube so I had to use youtube.
Beat by @scuzzy, "Do The Damn Thing"

This is the video:

Lyrics

I've always been the kid acting like he was raised in hell
Picking fights walking with a pocket knife with no fear
Got caught up once or twice but never saw d walls of a cell
You think I'm lucky, yeah I was, I paid my dues, me nd ma peers

Gangstalicious niqqa, fuck that I was just kidding
Ma mama raised me well, always praying for me and ma siblings
I'm the coolest niqqa ever liveth, I can't hide my feelings
And It's easier to express them mostly when I'm feeling tipsy

I make mistakes I make amends
I raised the stakes I place the bets
I kill the beat, they make arrest
The beat was ill, in ma defence
I'm getting laid I'm getting cheques
I'm getting placed among the best
I'm feeling good, I'm feeling blessed
I hope you understand.

That shit was breath taking, literally
I like ma bitches looking half naked
Yea, Perverted boy ma life is X rated
They testify my shit is good and I'm the next rated
It's not exaggerated

Thanks for listening, Please share your thoughts.
Do Have a wonderful day!