Letters to No One( Heartbreak)

in #poetry8 years ago

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He said he loved me;
He said I was the best thing that ever happened to him;
He said such words which made me fall for him;
Words which made him my god.
I fell for him,
For his words.
He was the soothing darkness which lived in me;
And the light which glowed in me.
When the sun was couched in a maze of darkness
And the night was piercing cold,
He held me tightly in his arms;
He made me feel warm.
When I was left alone to fight life's battles,
He showed up and fought beside me.
I gave him my heart in a heartbeat,
I gave him the keys to my heart in an impulse
But he threw the keys into the belly of the Atlantic.
When I thought life couldn't be any better,
He left me sprawling back to where I started.
He left me drowning in an ocean of tears.
He built a home in my heart,
And set it afire when I needed it most.
He took my happiness away;
Left me lone like a tear on a desert.
He broke my heart.

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THANKS FOR THE READ!

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I swear i would strangle him!!!
You know what? I hate love!
Am sorry i said that😁

Canst blame ye albeit. Love is one hell of a task.

Are you serious about hating love 😂😂😂💝💗💝

You know she isnt...Haha

Nice one bro, the creativity is popping from its peak

Jah Bless

I also hate love. It's more weird that I'm praying I don't ever feel it

Shut up and let us hear word

Hehehe. Is it your opinion?

I did not mean to paint such a bad picture of love. Man love is the most natural feeling but one that you have to work to keep it evergreen. You should want it more.

I feel tempted to believe that but I'm sorry, I'll be Thomas for this

Baba, u know for like calm down... When e go happen, you won't realise you are the one in love. Just tell us that you haven't met the right person.@hillarie

Love is one hell of a complication. Really nice poem, so relative to almost everyone's life

Yeah man. Love is really hell. Thanks for the comment

Oh God!!! @khojo have come with a hit
Don't make me cry here please. What an emotional write up. I admire your personification usage and simile. Very impress Brother.

Thanks man. You're always an inspiration. I dont mean for you to break down in tears though.

I am already crying... Khojo... your next poem must be about love (The positive one that would make us smile o)

Alrighty. I will make surest of that.

Stop blaming love, blame the person that tk love for granted ! Nice one bro

Hahaha! Thanks man. Love is to blame. If someone could, we wouldnt wanna fall in love.

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