New Logo Design-- Better Humanhood

jpiper20 (67)in #life • 10 years ago

So this is my newest client. I am currently working on their logo, this is the first draft I sent them.
The Business: positive/motivational lifestyle business -- podcasts, public speaking, personal and business coaching, newsletters, blogs, etc. The color is definitely not set, it is just there to show where they could apply color. What do you guys think so far? Any ideas for changes? They wanted a sort of geometric look to it, I was inspired by this typography:

Source:https://www.pinterest.com/pin/471189179741851809/