Your Golden Pen

in #poetry6 years ago

I am absolutely in love with this poem. Amazing!!

'...And in the background, playing...
...An Aussie Minstral and his music men...
Continue this moods amazing altruisms
...With a: 'Giving Melody'-written with your...
Golden Pen! '

There is something about that part of the poem that has a deep impact on my soul. When I read poems like this it makes me feel like love has collided with isolation.

I'm funny like that, what can I say?

Nevertheless, the set up to this poem is dazzling to me; completely delightful to read and even though it's just words, it has a colorful feeling to it.

I am a sucker for romance and fairy tales...

Believing in poems like this gives me a sense that people still care and still love when the world is becoming darker by day.

Correction...

The people roaming this beautiful planet are turning cold and weary. The world needs love, the people need love, and love must be shared.

So spread the peace, love, and happiness my friends.

Your Golden Pen by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Entangled in the depth of your blue eyes
...Entranced and in total bliss...
Embraced by your circled arms tight grasp
...Energized by your heavenly kiss...

We two are as a gift package
...Gift papered and tied with silk bow...
A grand presentation of sheer quality
...Of the sweet you that i have come to know...

...And in the background, playing...
...An Aussie Minstral and his music men...
Continue this moods amazing altruisms
...With a: 'Giving Melody'-written with your...
Golden Pen!
Theodora (Theo) Onken

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Keep steeming for a better tomorrow.
@Acknowledgement - God Bless

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Such a beautiful poem, I am too a hopeless romantic!

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