Poetic Justice
The style, and rhythm in her poetry is quite beautiful...
Her name is LunasChild8, and she is a new member to the website filled with brilliant poets. I have read many poems on the deepundergroundpoetry site, and I was pleased when I realized that the people who follow others or just happen to stop by for a good read never actually leave negative comments, but rather, words of encouragement and praise.
A community where feelings and thoughts are taken seriously and with open arms, but more importantly, with an open mind.
I have expressed numerous times my love for poetry, and love for wordsmiths. I am envious of their talents, but am extremely happy to read them, and somehow visualize the picture they are painting.
The poem down below was written and published by LunasChild8, and I hope to see more work from her, and will share all the great poems I come across with you folks. The steemit community...
I hope you all enjoy the good read as much as I did.
Poem by LunasChild8
Heart of Fire
Here we are lost in space,
Trying in vain to find our place;
The endless void is creeping in,
Will someone save us from our sin?
Suddenly the sky goes bright,
Glimmering with a thousand light;
Shoving the void with mighty ire
Igniting within our heart of fire.
Oh Shaman, holiest of all,
Heed our prayers, hear our call;
Protect the chosen on their voyage,
Fill their hearts and souls with courage.
With every dawn comes a new day,
Another reminder that we are safe;
Your being is pure, precious like sapphire,
May the sparks feed your heart of fire.
That's a beautiful poem that you shared. And yes, I agree the visual imagery that poems paint is extremely important and for me this poem paints some exceptional imagery. It also triggers a lot of emotion.
I followed you and started checking out your other posts. You've got some good content, Joseph! Keep up the good work! You're making steemit a great place.
excellent post, poems that you like when you start reading them, I hope your next publications.
Meaningful and creative, much love and appreciation :)
Stay passionate, stay blessed !
deep and soul ful, love it this is beautiful and flawless
She writes beautiful poems and needs to be recognized, thank you for sharing the work and bringing awareness to those who need it.
Howe nice poem. Love it.. Love.. love..
I agree with what you have said.She is a great poet.No doubt of it.I love the every single word of it.And I think it is nicely explain the situation now Im going through.Please share more work of her with us.
"May the sparks feed your heart of fire"
-Cheers-
correct. we enjoy between each phrase and space
Nice poem! I liked it
beautiful content!