EPIPHANY TO YOUR COMELINESS (An Original Poetry ➕ Poetic Analysis and Appreciations)

Your beauty is an omen!
an afflatus, for we men,
we're stunned by the sweet rising,
of your apparition
blinding the eyes of the sunset
you're an unnatural phenomenon,
that sparkles the order of the day,
like a lightening,
on a beautiful vivacious morning,
leaving us flabbergasted as idiots,
waiting for oasis In deserts.

We're spectators to your theophany,
watching your god-like skin of ebony,
smash our plastic hearts,
into a billion particles,
until the eyes becomes dazed,
by your perplexing comeliness
our mouth, agape
as we savour the colors of midday
gently blending into you
like milk sinking fast into water.

The epiphany to your comeliness,
is like a journey into a trance
a chance to dance with gods
your beauty is but a facade,
that strikes reality,
shaking the balance of the heart,
like a quake to the earth's core
yet, you're a beauty lie,
to them with no sight

We're in realisation,
a coming into perceptions,
a procession into your realm,
to discov,er velvets qualities,
blinking blindingly,
like a ragged fool etched to darkness,
but thrown into the light
our feets are sore from your journey,
mouth in awe

POETIC ANALYSIS, APPRECIATION & NOTES

Epiphany into your Comeliness is a poem that speaks about a realisation into a kind of beauty that isn't peculiar with life in general. The poet persona extols the extent to which he's definitely writing about and as a result he paints pictures of this unknown ladies beauty so much that he seemed lost In himself.

The poem gently extols outward beauty hence the influx of numerous imageries that Is filled in the poem. Infact the poet considers such beauty as a journey or a discovery, the Poet persona comes into an ephiphanic realisation of an unnatural beauty and as a result of this, it influences the ability to discern and the poet became filled with so much admiration that he started to doubt if this beauty was truly existence or real.

In his own experience he felt that it would be unbelievable for somebody else to understand what he's trying to picture and because of this he couldn't really explain the extent at which this beauty reached. In earnest the poem is a process of realisation into an unnatural beauty which we hardly see around although it is an outward kind of beauty but I'm not sure they're in the sense that it breaks every boundary of comparison

Written by @Josediccus