Pile of Disharmony 🤐 🤐 🤐

in #poetry9 years ago

Pile of Disharmony

by @jokster


It's better to be drunk than dead
What did you get from your vision?
The words were coming to my head
With such an amazing precision
Take a look at the street

Nobody is laughing and nobody care
We are all in a pile of disharmony
And it raises us high in the air
While we run around for money

Words of the master
Slamming like a knife
I'm I the only who sees disaster
While not a little of life

For me honey
You always were a stranger
Words of the master
Damn your dreams
And didn't let you enjoy

Tomorrow some strange people
Looking for my head
Their finger is at the gunpoint
Aiming to the target
Last moment before death
I observe you falling down
Just like I do

Crowd never forgive
They'll raise you in the air

Words of the master
Slamming like a knife
I'm I the only who sees disaster
While not a little of life


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"I'm I the only who sees disaster" I do see disaster sometimes ^_-
following you now, I look forward to seeing more fun poems.

-Happy Steeming! ^_-

We all see disaster, but this was a special kind of disaster that I wrote about. :)

Thanks! ^^

Hahaha! You are a real jokester! Following you now. See ya around ^_-
Happy Steeming!

I'm jokster, not jokester :D
I'll follow back. :)
See ya!

Hahaha clever is cool! Thank you for writing me back.

Thanks for following appreciate it.
How are you?

Thank you for taking time and comment on my article. I really appreciate that.

I'm great, thank you for asking.
It feels good today, just in the mood to write some poetry. :)

How are you doing?
I hope that you have a great day!

Hey you have a name? 😉🤣
Thank you for writing back.
I am doing great! Thanks for asking! 😊
I just went shopping for more make-up, I need to look like a human haha and got a massage I feel better lol

Glad to hear you are enjoying your time writing poems. When you going to finish your poem? Can you send me the link on my profile. Just comment anywhere or here.. I'll try to find it.

My name is Joseph, it's really nice to meet you! :)
What's your name?

What did you mean by your comment? That you didn't look like a human without makeup? :)

I finished my poem and published it about half hour ago, you can find it on my blog. Hope you'll enjoy it. It's a little bit depressing. But writing a poetry helps me to express and understand my feeling and I get so much better at coping with my problems when I write a song. :)

And thank you for being super friendly, I really enjoy this conversation with you.

I will support you, God bless you, I learn english, so if I made some mistakes, then I apologize and keep it and check me out @kamranbhatti
thank you very much

我会支持你,上帝保佑你,我学中文,所以如果我犯了一些错误,那么我道歉并保持
非常感谢你

Thank you for support, you are so kind. :)

Yeah thank you

I think you just need to look with different eyes :) and stop drinking also

I guess you are right, but I'll not stop. :)

you will you just dont realise it yet :)

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