Free Falling

in #poetry9 years ago

My 2nd attempt at a free verse poem. I had a few issues, but with some help, I think I've got all the kinks worked out.


When I begin I am flying but my heart rate is normal
As I close in on my destination the intensity is strong
When it’s time to go my heart beats like never before
Now that I am flying alone, my surroundings so serene
My anticipation has turned to wonder and I am free

Floating on a stream of air, cutting through the wind
My excitement is apparent and my enthusiasm surreal
But all good things must end, that time is almost here
So quickly it is all over but my mind and my body cries
I can’t wait to do it all again, free falling from the skies

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