Without you
everything seems
desolate...
The Moon ascends
to cold heights
and I
a ragged sky
filled with dark kisses...
mark the hours
abandoned by you
everything seems
desolate...
The Moon ascends
to cold heights
and I
a ragged sky
filled with dark kisses...
mark the hours
abandoned by you
Really good lines ! <3
thank you
Cool art, it would make a Great cover to a children's book. Light and friendly!
I wanted a folk art pic to lighten the mood of the poem. I agree, it would be appropriate for a children's book cover
beautiful! very well done. Captures the feelings exactly.
thanks, @somena
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O yes that is exactly how it feels - you just have the abillity to put it sucks in such beautiful words :)
I appreciate your encouragement, @anneke
Simple yet amazing 😊
thank you, athena
Very beautiful lines indeed. Short yet full of emotions. :)
thanks, @littlerph
you're welcome! :D
Could be obsession?
yes, definitely :)