The Land of the Little While
If I loved you,
Or put other things
Above you,
But we were
Once together
For a while.
I doubt you ever
Pleased me
And I can’t find
Any reason
Why I stayed
For just one season
Or how it ever
Got that far.
You never picked up
Leaves in autumn
Or cared about
My problems
Or paused with me
To look up
At a star
So, perhaps, I never loved you,
Or put other things
Above you,
But surely
I must have loved you...
For a while.
How is it that human love can come and go so?
I find that our mortality and "the rules" during the present age of the world interfere rather severely with our emotions...
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yes, some past relationships seem a dream as if lived by a stranger - that's the feeling - estrangement
Yes... separation in time and space and communication...
I recall once feeling "thrown under the bus"... but, though estranged and distant, all is forgiven...
What a lovely, wonderful poem ,feeling of love. ......
thank you, @amitraj
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As usual, I love your work. This poem has a lovely rhythm. I found myself reading it with a beat :) I have prepared a musical piece in honour of this lovely poem. I tried to keep the spirit of the rhythm and sectional nature. I also did it in 3/4 time which I feel is the most intimate of metres - the waltz. I hope you enjoy...
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beautifull poetry
Thank you
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Starting to end nice poem
thank you
Nice poem describe relation love life